Now if music and sound has that type of power, why would you leave it out of your game? The MC often takes fresh air breaks, so why not add the sound of a gently breeze(or whatever the weather is like), humming and shower sounds, moans, and varies other sounds. Almost every emotion known to men can be felt by music, and sound follows the same principle. Music is like medicine to our souls, where words fail, music speaks. Your writing abilities aren't bad at all, it just sounds very unnatural to a Native English speaker, and the more time the players spend correcting your errors, the more they'll become disinterested in your product.
Hire or ask for help from a Native English speaker, to fix/minimize the many grammatical errors that are present in your writing. However, I see a lot of potential in this game, therefore i wanted to leave my review and a few suggestions, that could potentially get you 5 stars from everyone. Usually I don't like writing out reviews, due to them taking a lot of my time. Why are the male MC's "enemies" depraved?.The division of the stories seems unnecessary because you leave out other secondary characters.The secondary characters have an empty story without being well developed.Some fetishes need to be developed more.Some objects in the environment look out of place Lifeless game environment, some structures like buildings,furniture,clothes have absolutely perfect borders lines it's too fake.The dialogues are very boring I couldn't connect with any character.The only interesting character is Ellie, the others don't exist.The thing I hate the most about this game are the border lines of the characters it looks like a picture pasted and added to a generic background.The story is easy to understand but it's so boring, unoriginal, I'm sure you'll play it once and forget about it.Renderings are generic, nothing impressive.The idea of different routes is fine but you should be clear from the beginning of the game.I liked a bit how the romance was developing - clichés should be avoided.
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